this room is big and bright
and sunny look at the sun and smile
and see the cracks in the walls and the
cracks in the skin.
let me out, let me in, let me out, let me in.
only room and only space
| lol untitled poems always atrached my attension. but this was pretty good. i only wished that it was a little longer, not much longer but more so to show how much you really do hate the room. well thx for the read.|
|| Posted on 2006-10-03 00:00:00 | by disturbedx1000 | [ Reply to This ] || Hey nice poem... You should try giving it a name tho||| Posted on 2006-10-03 00:00:00 | by Black-Death | [ Reply to This ] |