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Yaku Gunn


Author: Uthmaan
ASL Info:    11/M/Texas
Elite Ratio:    1.83 - 44 /33 /7
Words: 49
Class/Type: Poetry /Legend
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Yaku Gunn



Yaku Gunn
It's not a phony
It's not false
and know it is true

It listens to what I say
and it follows what I do.

Yaku Gunn
While I dream it teaches me to fight
and while Im not it tries to fight me.




Submitted on 2006-10-03 21:19:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  lol this is cute! Is Yaka Gunn an anime character? Forgive me cuz I don't know, but I do like the looks of the poem especially the ending with the fact that he tries to fight you even when you're not dreaming! So that means he's credible =P

I believe you!

Salaam

~darkrose16
| Posted on 2007-01-15 00:00:00 | by darkrose16 | [ Reply to This ]
  yo now this is good shyt.

awsome write lil bro.

ur naruto crazy.
| Posted on 2006-10-03 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]


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