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    dots Submission Name: Yaku Gunndots
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    Author: Uthmaan
    ASL Info:    11/M/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    1.83 - 44/33/7
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Poetry/Legend
    Total Views: 845
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsYaku Gunndots
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    Yaku Gunn
    It's not a phony
    It's not false
    and know it is true

    It listens to what I say
    and it follows what I do.

    Yaku Gunn
    While I dream it teaches me to fight
    and while Im not it tries to fight me.




    Submitted on 2006-10-03 21:19:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      lol this is cute! Is Yaka Gunn an anime character? Forgive me cuz I don't know, but I do like the looks of the poem especially the ending with the fact that he tries to fight you even when you're not dreaming! So that means he's credible =P

    I believe you!

    Salaam

    ~darkrose16
    | Posted on 2007-01-15 00:00:00 | by darkrose16 | [ Reply to This ]
      yo now this is good shyt.

    awsome write lil bro.

    ur naruto crazy.
    | Posted on 2006-10-03 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]


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