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    dots Submission Name: A Red Moon Risesdots
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    Author: xingu32
    ASL Info:    18, Male, WA
    Elite Ratio:    2.04 - 9/18/36
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 109
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       Death of a young girl, a man (me) is present at her burrial


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    dotsA Red Moon Risesdots
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    When the moon turns red, a young woman dies
    The endless hollow beatings of a dead heart echoes through fog shrouded woods
    Red tears of pain drip from my eyes
    The soundless splash of wet blood hits a small clump of green grass
    Then the rains begin
    They begin throwing dirt upon your oaken coffin

    Her body which held the life and beauty of an angle
    Her brown hair and dark green eyes that glowed through the night’s mist
    Her image slowly burns into my minds eye, searing my eyes until they sting

    The sound of spades begins to slow and stop
    The dirt muddy and red holds her in its embrace
    As I turn away my black coat swirls and I walk way forever in tears




    Submitted on 2006-10-03 22:32:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is good, very powerful and descriptive. has a mysterious feel to it too.
    i love the imagery,
    great stuff!!
    whirl**
    | Posted on 2006-10-21 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]



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