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    dots Submission Name: The Stages of Lifedots
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    Author: xingu32
    ASL Info:    18, Male, WA
    Elite Ratio:    2.04 - 9/18/36
    Words: 311
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 110
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    Bytes: 1830



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    dotsThe Stages of Lifedots
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    At first the infant loud, obnoxious, pestering yet still cute, with small teeth and large eyes
    It learns to breathe fresh air
    Small and still innocent, his eyes stare dimly into the world beyond

    Then a small child thrust into school
    With his tiny backpack and quick smiles against the tide of old ladies with large grins
    Struggling to put one foot forward
    He lives for the quick respites of recess

    The older high school boy full of dreams and hopes but a man not yet
    For he is a hunter and his game is all around
    Icy blood flows through his heart of steel, cold stares, and colder smiles
    Searching for the spark to start the wildfire within

    Then the fighter
    Gambling, drinking wasting away, too hardened for a smile
    Just sneers and shot-glasses filled with warm tears
    Ripped apart he takes to the streets
    Using hard fists and harsh words to gain a reputation

    Then a family man trying to make it in the world
    Under the tutelage of the woman he calls wife he becomes civilized
    With his suburban house and white picket fence he lives without convictions
    Hardened scars cross his body
    Gained in pride and worn with shame they become stories scorned

    Old he becomes under his children’s watchful gaze his smiles turn feeble and slow
    Not being able to do things for himself makes him hateful and sour
    Last he puts down his hands and rests them upon his bed
    He tells his children to rest his body in the cold, hard earth
    For his last act of life is upon him

    His contemplations end and he wastes away
    Arising as a ghost in the killing fields of crushing, black oblivion he laughs




    Submitted on 2006-10-03 23:00:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      amazing JOB here, amazing. I love ohe oyu start it off.. and how it slowly but truelys ends with the ending of this mans life. How you describe it, is.. is amazing to say the lease I love this piece. keep up the great work

    ~*Jackie*~
    | Posted on 2006-10-04 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]



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