as i came home from school i hoped u werent there i took off my bookbag and i ran upstairs im only 16 can u please stay away but u dident listen nor did u think u just stuck it inside me while i was asleep i opened my eyes and all i could see was my mind was playing tricks on me
i thought it was a dreAm but then he whispered it ok then i said stop its hurting me today i started bleeding but it wasent the first time i bleed
he did it a couple times before and all those times i told my mom she just dident wanna hear it anymore after he was riping me inside i took a deep breath after he was done he said kid get dressed
i wipe my tears from falling from this ugly face ugly from believing my mother had good taste they got married while i died inside just for me to always remember my stepdad holds my child.........
Bitter and brutal. He subject matter is unshakeable.
A critique on the writing, the pace is a little frantic, I could see that being te aim, but a sick twist of sensuality would really make flesh crawl. Really drive the point home.
Submission Name: stop!!!!
