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Submission Name:
Butterfly
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Author:
wildriver
ASL Info:
18/Female/kearney, NE
Elite Ratio:
1.84 - 13/12/12
Words:
99
Class/Type:
Poetry/Longing
Total Views:
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Description:
Hmmm, if i had a description, you may not understand anyway :)
Butterfly
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Where will I go today,
what pain will I see?
I watch what you do,
but you ignore me.
I pass by
unnoticed, again;
the question is not
why I'm here,
and the answer is not when.
You will not find me,
because I am not here;
I was with you once
and you had no fear.
Chances are taken,
and hopes feebly tossed;
to the moon and back,
for my love was lost.
Wings of dazzle
sink without control;
only you can lift me
from my light forsaken hole.
Submitted on 2006-10-04 19:03:20
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That's so pretty.
As sad as it is, it seemed to have a big sparkly cloud around it.
I don't know if that makes any sense... but I really enjoyed this.
I like the butterfly metaphor.
Although I am terrified of butterflies, they are very pretty. lol
Wonderfully done
-nikkki
| Posted on 2006-10-09 00:00:00 | by
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