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    dots Submission Name: Letterdots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 255
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 700
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1530



    Description:
       I Dont Know What This Is Meant To Be But Yeh I Wrote It A While Ago


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    *Verse 1*
    Woke up one mornin
    To find a letter right by mah side
    It said im sorry
    But I have to leave
    This is good bye
    How could he do this
    He just broke my heart
    I guess ill never know why


    *Chorus*
    Why does it hurt so badly
    Why am I startin 2 cry
    This cant be happening
    Its gotta be a dream
    This is not my life

    *Verse 2*
    Was there another person
    Was I just not right
    Maybe she is perfect
    Maybe I just wasted my life
    If only I knew why
    Maybe I could have changed it
    Instead of sittin here askin mah self why


    *Chorus*
    Why does it hurt so bad
    Why am I startin 2 cry
    This cant be happenin
    Its gotta be a dream
    This is not my life


    *Verse 3*
    Im sittin her reminisen
    Bout all the good things that were in my life
    Like the way you made me laugh
    Made me smile while lookin in ur eyes
    But iíve gotta somethin to say
    Im stronger with out you by my side
    You may think you left me
    You may feel all big inside
    But I had to put up with you
    And baby I wish you never came in to mah life

    *Chorus*
    Why does it hurt so bad
    Why am I startin 2 cry
    This cant be happenin
    Its gotta be a dream
    This is not my life
    When will it change..................




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