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    dots Submission Name: Realdots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 309
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Sittin next to him watchin the sunlight hit his eyes
    The smile on his face makes me loose my mind
    I sit here watchin and hopin for him to make a move
    But as time goes by I realise he doesnít feel like that
    Am I wasting my time am I living a lie to ever think this guy would want me by his side
    Im so not perfect not a princess in his eyes
    I donít deserve him I should forget about it
    Because im wasting my time
    Im his closest friend he has told me that
    But it still doesnít change how I feel
    You made me hurt you made me cry
    Deep down inside I want to die
    It hurts to know you donít feel this way
    But every time I see you I pretend im fine
    To see her all over you tears me up inside
    Makes me wonder why I even try
    Would you really miss me if one day I decided to say goodbye
    boy you have changed me but you cant see
    iíve gone from immature lil crushes to what I believe is love
    And the hatred for my life has finally passed by
    Not only am I stronger but I learnt its ok to cry
    And knowing your there for me puts all my fears aside
    But why am I writing this why not say it to your face
    Im afraid of ur reaction
    Scared youíll shut the door and ill lose the only reason for my life
    Maybe one day ill get the courage to tell you how I feel
    But till that day these papers hold my heart the key to my soul
    And if by chance you read this before I explain how I feel
    I want you to know that every word I wrote was real




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