Description: This is a poem I wrote awhile ago..I know see the meaning of this poem at different perspectives..I just want to know what you think of it
This Lie -------------------------------------------
Trying so hard to get my mind
Off that horrible lie
That seems to keep consuming me with time
It's all about how you turn to me and say goodbye
You look straight into my eyes
Take me by suprise
By you telling me this love has died
That's when I scream "You Lie"
As a tear falls from my eye
What a crazy thought I know
All this coming from deep below
Maybe it's just me and my emotions
Just going insane
I bet it's from missing you so much each day
But it's time for me to stop worrying of such things
Put a smile on my face
And wait for what tomorrow has to bring
Oh my goodness this is so good! At first I thought man, another sad poem about being dumped, but yours shows that there is always a way to get over it, and it is so strong of you!! LOVE IT!
Submission Name: This Lie
