Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: untitleddots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: imported_air
    ASL Info:    15/f/pa
    Elite Ratio:    1.3 - 1/5/4
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Misc/You left me
    Total Views: 528
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 830



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsuntitleddots
    -------------------------------------------


    Let's take a drive up to Aberdine,
    Where the world is like a painting, and your friends pixelated.
    If you start to feel real
    Just take another hit or five.

    Your only love burns and decays
    But you know you set my heart on fire.

    If you go to the park,
    I guess I'll keep watch.
    Eyes red, body numb
    Is this what you meant by nothing in common?

    "I'm cold, it's the only reason I'm going."
    But I was there to keep you warm.
    So just drive away and leave me here,
    We'll talk another day.
    I'm hungry too, you know.

    Kiss me under the fireworks.
    I couldn't fix you, but I was willing to try.

    Excuses are for addicts.





    Submitted on 2006-10-04 21:27:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      well to be completley honest its alright but next time i would try to make it a little more interresting to keep the reader from getting side tracked while reading.
    | Posted on 2007-02-14 00:00:00 | by lonelybug | [ Reply to This ]
      excellent write. i never knew you had this hidden little talent. ;) i know it's 'cause you're upset but maybe you should try writing even when you're not upset. anyways... you captured it. you hit the nail on the head. excuses are for addicts. i'd love this even more if i didn't know where it was coming from... i'm sorry this happened to you it wasn't fair. you just want what we all want. someone true and someone to love you.
    | Posted on 2006-10-04 00:00:00 | by narcolepsy | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    New users can only get up to 5 comments if they have given 2 or less.