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What 17 really means


Author: Sweet as Sugar
ASL Info:    17/F/WY
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My friend committed suicide last feburary and i found this in my journal when i was mulling it all over. I dearly miss him in my life. He was truly unique and i know everyone who loved him is still thinking of him.


What 17 really means



Seventeen. What a strange number. Sixteen seems so young, yet seventeen is a man.Seventeen. He was seventeen and didn't know what he was doing. I guess they found a note with him after he shot himself. His mother was the first to find him.

Her precious little boy now seventeen and supposedly a man.




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  Suicide no matter how you look at it is truly a tragedy
Though I was raised Catholic I strongly STRONGLY disagree that those who commit suicide do not go to Heaven
All God ever asked of us is to help our fellow man move forward and I can see this person made a huge Positive impact non your Life and Others so I am Positive he is waiting patiently to reunite with the Love of his best Friend
Until that time just look to your Heart and always find him waiting there to help you Move Forward in Life
A tragic tale but I know it helps to write about it
As writing helps heal
God Bless
Ron

Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
Thank You
Ron
| Posted on 2006-10-05 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
  Yeah, it hurts. So young, yet thought to be so old. Wait a few years, and 17 will pass you by.
| Posted on 2006-10-05 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]


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