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Author: Poetic Ways
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Take my hand and allow me to lead the way,
Give me your attention for I have much to say,
I want to give you a taste of whats to come for us,
Sensational moments of nothing but pure pleasure,
Rare occasions of perfection better learn to treasure,
The most extraordinary affair of love and pain,
Beautiful days turn into grotesque nights of rain,
Long talks abot the future and all that it stores,
Victory & losses for love is nothing but on-going wars,
Advice from the outside does less good more harm,
A way to make things better as fake as the charm,
A nightmare come true when the original dream has crashed,
This is what happens when two different hearts have clashed.

Submitted on 2006-10-04 22:08:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  ...Wow, I'm kind of confused on what you were meaning here. If its a loved one you want to understand or have them understand you better or if you simply want the other person you care for so much to understand what you long for ... to understand your desires of the future. with this loved one

| Posted on 2006-10-05 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]
  Wow. Not much I can say, but how very true.

"Sensational moments of nothing but pure pleasure
Rare occasions of perfection better learn to treasure
The most extraordinary affair of love and pain"

these are my favorite lines. a romantic getaway of hearts. pleasure is simply beautiful, isn't it? ~. ^
| Posted on 2006-10-04 00:00:00 | by LovelyGoddess | [ Reply to This ]

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