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Author: Black-Death
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Im still here!!!!!

Only mother... Read description

Life... Started june 1990... and endid 2007...

Mother only you can see the life in my eyes... June 28 1990
Mother... only you cant see the fight i have in me...June 28 1991
Mother... only you can see the child in me June 28 1995
Mother as you look deep into my eyes... you cant even tell the pain June 28 2000...
Mother... as you look at my wrists Only you can see the vains now poisend with depreson... June 28 2001
Mother... Only you cant see the brusis on my soul... on my heart.... June 28 2002
Mother... Only you can see my love for everything... Only you...June 28 2003
Mother... Only you cant see .. im suiuside....June 28 2004
Mother... only you can see my bloody wrists... now laying on the floor... June 29 2006
Mother... only you cant see... that im dead now... inside and out... you loved... im sorry... June 28 2007

Life... Started june 1990... and endid 2007...

Mother... i love you... i hope you get to read this before i end my life with this knife... now shinning with blood... Brother... i love you... Mother.... good bye forever... i hope to see you in heaven...

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  now tell me your still alive. tell me your getting some help. Tell me your not going at this alone. tell me you'll be okay. even though i don't know you. Know that your only dying for yourself and nobody else. Know that it can't be reversed. And know that if it's what you really want, no one is going to stop you. Know that as the knife lays in your cold lifeless hands you were the one who chose to do it.
| Posted on 2006-10-05 00:00:00 | by nonamelottie | [ Reply to This ]

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