[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: Deathdots

    Author: Vampiric Death
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 133/159/91
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 685
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 312

       A simile poem that i wrote & has been published.

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.


    The dark path
    Endless exhistance
    The only certainty in life
    The end of the known road
    The beginning of an epic journey
    Walking through a closed door
    to all who live.

    Submitted on 2006-10-05 09:09:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||
      So it's like we all know that we will die, it ends the first part of our journey, and all those that live do not know of it, for it's a path, a destiny for it spirit. Deep, stuff man, I encourage you to make like a Death series.

    I just gave myself an idea...
    | Posted on 2006-10-26 00:00:00 | by Twisted | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh thank heavens, I thought this would be as long as the previous one. Eye candy :-) . Good one. No wonder it got published.
    | Posted on 2006-10-06 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]
      ... Published in the school news paper?

    I've been published too, you know. Granted, it was in crayon and coloured paper with string, but...

    | Posted on 2006-10-05 00:00:00 | by Lacrimosa | [ Reply to This ]

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    written by Daniel Barlow
    Fasade written by jackz
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    written by Daniel Barlow
    More then just goodbye written by faideddarkness
    Your Lover written by Cordell
    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades
    World I No Longer Want written by ForgottenGraves
    Still Fighting See? written by ForgottenGraves
    Dashboard Light written by layDsayD
    descent written by TheBadSadMan
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    the living moment written by ShyOne
    Estranged / Shocks written by Daniel Barlow
    AI written by poetotoe
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    Happy Saint Patrick's Day written by poetotoe
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (final) written by endlessgame23
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Before, Now, & After written by SincerWritinAsh
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Linger written by saartha
    Waiting written by Daniel Barlow
    True Death written by layDsayD
    Bond written by saartha




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]