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    dots Submission Name: Deathdots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 133/159/91
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       A simile poem that i wrote & has been published.


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    dotsDeathdots
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    Death
    The dark path
    Endless exhistance
    The only certainty in life
    Like
    The end of the known road
    The beginning of an epic journey
    Walking through a closed door
    Unknown
    to all who live.




    Submitted on 2006-10-05 09:09:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      So it's like we all know that we will die, it ends the first part of our journey, and all those that live do not know of it, for it's a path, a destiny for it spirit. Deep, stuff man, I encourage you to make like a Death series.

    I just gave myself an idea...
    | Posted on 2006-10-26 00:00:00 | by Twisted | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh thank heavens, I thought this would be as long as the previous one. Eye candy :-) . Good one. No wonder it got published.
    | Posted on 2006-10-06 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]
      ... Published in the school news paper?

    I've been published too, you know. Granted, it was in crayon and coloured paper with string, but...

    xox,
    N'body.
    | Posted on 2006-10-05 00:00:00 | by Lacrimosa | [ Reply to This ]


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