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    dots Submission Name: Alone. Again.dots

    Author: Areinaka
    ASL Info:    20, F, Oregon, USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.91 - 130/114/29
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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       Hmph. I hate men. That's all there is to it. I am so done with relationships and all the crap.

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    dotsAlone. Again.dots

    Darkness crosses my path.
    Only briefly.
    The light.
    It returns quickly.
    I have realized something tragic.
    I do not need you.
    I need no one.
    Alone, I thrive.
    Life goes on.
    If not better,
    Than no worse.
    It's good
    That you're gone.
    I thank you.
    You taught me
    Never to trust.

    Submitted on 2006-10-05 12:01:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      POWERFUL WORDS....THE BEST WRITINGS COMES FROM EERIENCES AND OBVIOUSLY YOU HAVE LIVED THROUGH THIS SITUATION. The best things about this write (in my opinion) was the way you admitted that it hurt to be alone and I was not a choice you had personally made........ but you learned to except and deal with it and even to be strong through it and for that I love it.

    grreat write
    | Posted on 2006-10-07 00:00:00 | by L.L.COLLINS | [ Reply to This ]

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