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Author: shambolic
ASL Info:    19.Female.Mozchester
Elite Ratio:    1.92 - 10 /11 /15
Words: 38
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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I really really cannot explain - I don't actually think before I write on most occasions hence things like this...


Not the colour of
a queen
of a dream.
of death and glory. glory glory
Man Utd
Fuck that pleasantry
Fuck this question
Red not the colour of
death not glory
What is it to be?

Submitted on 2006-10-05 15:46:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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