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    dots Submission Name: just a boxdots
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    Author: atonement
    Elite Ratio:    2.71 - 106/186/98
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       ah the boredoms of Math class


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    dotsjust a boxdots
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    It's just a box,
    a card board container,
    a brown piece of garbage,
    never ment to be kept,
    just a place to store forgotten treasures.

    It's just a box,
    something worth nothing,
    except for whats in side,
    just a place for unwated items,
    or things not yet used.

    It's just a box,
    a silly little play thing,
    that's shaped to your imagitive way,
    a home for dolls,
    a fort to protect,
    but still all I see,
    is just a box.




    Submitted on 2006-10-05 19:26:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Great poem! I like how you discribe the box as to you just a box but to someone else, it is something to hold items or to be just a toy. Something that I need to learn how to do when I write. Good read.

    ~javajunkie~
    | Posted on 2006-10-07 00:00:00 | by javajunkie | [ Reply to This ]


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