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    dots Submission Name: Faith in the Fatherdots
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    Author: jaycee
    ASL Info:    36/F/ Texas
    Elite Ratio:    4.84 - 2397/1162/153
    Words: 221
    Class/Type: Lyrics/
    Total Views: 210
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       This is the first song I've written in a while and it actually came together remarkably fast. I'm not sure if it was listening to new music or helping Crash, or if this one was just meant to be written.


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    dotsFaith in the Fatherdots
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    Sometimes I feel so alone
    And the world outside
    Seems as hard as a stone
    Sometimes late at night I cry
    but I keep looking forward
    I won't crumble inside

    [Chorus]
    Cuz I have faith in the Father
    And I've put my trust
    In the words of his son
    I have faith in the Father
    Whatever road I'm on
    I'm not alone
    With the Father

    Sometimes I can't see the wrong
    Yah the lines get blurred
    Or I'm not feeling so strong
    Sometimes I forget to pray
    But I know iwhen I'm lost
    I can still find my way


    Cuz I have faith in the Father
    And I've put my trust
    In the words of his son.
    I have faith in the Father
    Whatever road I'm on
    I'm not alone
    With the Father.

    {bridge}
    Temptations all around us
    in our every day lives
    But I can look into the darkness
    And still find a light.

    Cuz I have faith in the Father
    And I've put my trust
    In the words of his son
    I have faith in the Father
    Whatever road I'm on
    I'm not alone

    Yes I'll put my faith
    In the saving Grace
    of the Father

    My Heavenly Father











    Submitted on 2006-10-05 21:59:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      YAY! I love this! There are times when faith is all a person has and thats enough to help someone see the light through the storm. I think this poem shows that great!
    | Posted on 2008-03-11 00:00:00 | by Jessica Lynn | [ Reply to This ]
      Amen! Yes, to have that love, unconditional, and the beauty of faith in that love. We need never be alone

    Great!
    love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    tif
    | Posted on 2008-03-11 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      every one needs to put their faith in the Heavenly Father. I believe if the government officals would stop and listen to Him and put Him first in their work America would not be where it is today.
    don't mean to start on politics and religion.
    by the way your faith is showing lol
    | Posted on 2006-10-17 00:00:00 | by hotrodruss | [ Reply to This ]
      This was a very assuring song. You told the story straight and true. Well done!
    | Posted on 2006-10-06 00:00:00 | by The Gadfly | [ Reply to This ]



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