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    dots Submission Name: FIGHT BACKdots
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    Author: L.L.COLLINS
    ASL Info:    25-ORLANDO, FL
    Elite Ratio:    4.6 - 167/144/32
    Words: 314
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 115
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1906



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    dotsFIGHT BACKdots
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    Fight back you sorry sack of shit,
    get off your knees and quit begging like a bitch.
    I told you London bridges would tumble and fall,
    so this kind of shit is all your fault.
    talk big and act bad now do something
    bitch quit wiggling and shake something
    you so quick to spit out your bullshit
    but I always knew you was full-a-shit
    quite hiding and running with your punk ass
    wearing that bad ass like it's a mask
    sad how the mirror can lie to your face
    thinking lip mace will keep you safe
    but you ain't shit until you prove it
    so since you such a maniac; loose it
    I'm sick of your excuses, you're so fucking useless
    always crying and going through shit
    said you had my back but you ain’t do shit
    said you knew it all but you're so damn clueless.
    how the fuck could you be fake
    tears? hugs? but its too damn late
    be bad enough to sell out to my face
    don't get all ballistic when a bitch walk away
    screaming and hollin' all loud out the mouth
    but fuck that chit chat bitch lets get it down
    I know you ain’t scared; you run this bitch
    walking round acting like you tough as bricks
    trying to convince mothafuckers you kind of crazy
    but your time bomb been just ticking for ages
    I hate a bitch like you; I swear I do
    kick ass fast with that tongue Kong fu
    but when you gone stand up and fight like a man
    when you gone have something besides "a plan"
    quit letting these motherfuckers run over you
    always stuck to the bottom of a bitch shoe
    leave there faces with blackened eyelids
    kick them in the stomach snatch off there wigs
    fight back danmit; get up and clown
    put up your dukes; stand your ground.




    Submitted on 2006-10-06 01:52:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This seriously sounds like a rap song. I'm sorry if that's not how you ment it, but I would seriously love to hear this on the radio. It's so gut wrenching and in your face and just wow... you are a great writer, you should seriously think about this as a career, maybe you could sell it to someone, you know rights to it. For some big money$$$. I don't know I'm just saying great!!! ~Ashley~
    | Posted on 2006-11-05 00:00:00 | by redeemer | [ Reply to This ]
      Perhaps more ppl should fight back, there wouldn't be so much bullying and everyone would just be the same as each other, there would be no hurt like there is now, only, if we all fought back, there would be no world as it would have been a full scale nuclear war a long time ago.
    I like this very much, it is very powerful and shows how strong you should be when they put you down. I hope you heed your own advice.
    Take care
    Frann. x
    | Posted on 2006-10-06 00:00:00 | by Effee | [ Reply to This ]


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