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    dots Submission Name: When You've Lost It Alldots
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    Author: brokenblonde
    ASL Info:    16/f/Tennessee
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 0/2/4
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
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    dotsWhen You've Lost It Alldots
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    Broken glass
    And shattered dreams
    Are all that's left
    In this world for me
    I dig down deep
    And still can't find
    The one true love
    That once was mine
    This will pass
    Is what I'm told
    As the rollercoaster climbs
    And I can't grab hold
    I scream and cry
    And gasp for air
    All will see
    None will care
    As I hit the ground
    I feel no pain
    Till my love looks away
    And shakes his head in shame
    They lay me in the ground
    After my death
    Why'd I do it?
    Because I've got nothing left




    Submitted on 2006-10-06 11:01:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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