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    dots Submission Name: When the Dragon Calls Againdots
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    Author: Areinaka
    ASL Info:    20, F, Oregon, USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.91 - 130/114/29
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       This was an assignment for an english class, based on another poem called When the Owl Calls Again. I can't remember who the author is, but he's famous. If you could tell me, that would be great.


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    dotsWhen the Dragon Calls Againdots
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    Darkness rises,
    A burst of flame interrupts the peace.
    A shadow flies in front of the moon.

    Wings flare,
    A slight shudder travels through the ground.
    Power emanates from the gentle giant.

    Flying upwards,
    The wind rages past us, trying to disrupt us.
    The king of fire is unhindered.

    Diving down,
    Sharp talons stab into flesh.
    The stench of raw meat fills the air.

    Hunger sated,
    We soar upwards once more.
    Exulting in the pure ecstasy of flight.

    Wings folding,
    The sun shows its cursed face.
    Ending the joyous ride.




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      OH! Noctournal lord of night and fire, show us you supremecy over the younger dragon whelps... that is what you meant for it to be right? a group of dragons preying upon people in the night time where one regned supreme and the others kinda sat back and enjoyed their food? well anyway... yeah that prety much what i took from it. keep up the writing, hope ta see ya around more.

    buh bye

    Luke/Lareth
    | Posted on 2006-10-08 00:00:00 | by Lareth | [ Reply to This ]


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