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    dots Submission Name: Smile on the Voiddots
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    Author: Areinaka
    ASL Info:    20, F, Oregon, USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.91 - 130/114/29
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
    Total Views: 743
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       This is one of my favorites. I wrote it after reading Smile on the Void. I highly recommend this book. It is so very odd, I had to read it about five times before I finally understood it, but once I did, I loved it.


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    dotsSmile on the Voiddots
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    Language is a prison.
    It ensnares our minds.
    It entraps our souls.
    We are limited only to what we believe.
    Reality is distorted.
    Myth and fantasy become the truth.
    Lies crash down upon us.
    Showing us who we really are.
    The barriers around our minds fall.
    Opening them to the harsh light of Fate.
    Death and Life become entwined.
    The world spins backwards,
    Throwing us into space.
    Our minds flood with Truth.
    For we are truly invincible.
    It is only when we give up.
    Then we die.
    Life is given eternally.
    Death has been cheated.
    Reality, fantasy...
    There is no difference anymore.




    Submitted on 2006-10-06 12:06:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      amazing way with words, i could see the imagery you used. awesome
    ~rach~
    | Posted on 2006-10-16 00:00:00 | by dark lover | [ Reply to This ]


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