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    dots Submission Name: Emotional Sandstormdots
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    Author: Areinaka
    ASL Info:    20, F, Oregon, USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.91 - 130/114/29
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsEmotional Sandstormdots
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    Caught in an emotional sandstorm.
    Inflicting pain upon my soul.

    Anger at being trapped and used.
    Sadness for those being abused.

    Hatred for almost everything.
    Love is only a passing fling.

    Pain attacks with no remorse.
    Pleasure comes only if its forced.

    Happiness is very rare.
    As for the rest, I just don't care.




    Submitted on 2006-10-06 12:11:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      short but says a lot. Nicely written :)

    ~*jackie*~
    | Posted on 2006-10-06 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]
      The statements in this poem are so bold and breath taking they really don't much support explanation, but I think maybe you have to have felt this way to understand it completely. I did like this write but not as much as other that I have read of yours, because sometimes nice and short doesn't say enough about you, the writer.

    nice job
    llcollins
    | Posted on 2006-10-13 00:00:00 | by L.L.COLLINS | [ Reply to This ]


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