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    dots Submission Name: Lifedots
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    Author: insphered soul
    ASL Info:    19/M/ Hmmm?
    Elite Ratio:    6.49 - 450/382/94
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    Description:
       I fear sameness. Equalness. All that stuff that makes the unique look normal.

    Its like saying a ghost is apart of a haunted mansion ride at a theme park. It takes away from its uniqueness by making it into something everyone can see.

    Its bullshit.


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    dotsLifedots
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    What is this life?

    Just another day
    at the fucking paper cafe
    reading about death?

    Or

    Is it something more?
    something worth believing in
    and something worth striving
    to be apart of?

    Everyday
    I wake up to the same shit

    My eyes dont decieve
    when I can see the truth in front of me
    I see these streets
    the people walking on them

    I know there's more to see
    more to get to know

    But I stay away
    the fear of sameness keeps me at bay
    I try to sway from the fear
    everytime I think about it
    I die inside




    Submitted on 2006-10-06 14:01:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      and yay!

    you did it ^.^


    i love you
    | Posted on 2007-10-26 00:00:00 | by GoKart Mozart | [ Reply to This ]
      s h i t *



    ((since words such as that can be used in submissions))
    | Posted on 2007-10-26 00:00:00 | by GoKart Mozart | [ Reply to This ]
      this was amazing...lleaves ya wanting more...and i think it would've been even stronger if you'd said, for instance, "[censored]" not "stuff"


    +Moz+
    | Posted on 2007-04-13 00:00:00 | by GoKart Mozart | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow man. . . . . . . . . . . . I love this poem. I already added it to my faves. It's amazing. Nobody sees that sameness is showing that you are not you own person. It is showing that you are a clone and a follower. I want to be a leader. I think that everybody should be a leader in their own way. Being a leader mean being your own person, but at the same time being a good person. It is also not caring if you are part of the next fad or what people will think of you if you're not. Everybody like nice stuff and cool clothes, but you can still get that without trying to follow a retarded trend. Any way . . . . . . I just really liked this piece.


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    SD
    | Posted on 2007-03-13 00:00:00 | by SilentDreams42 | [ Reply to This ]
      hmph. this write was very intresting. caught my attention. what inspired you r=to write like this? because it f u c k i n g kicks ass.

    awesome write!

    :]]]] Mandi
    | Posted on 2006-11-30 00:00:00 | by Is this love? | [ Reply to This ]
      hey u made the sameness different.(=
    i think everyone fears sameness cuz its quite scary...
    *pictures same clone people and even worse seeing the same things every day...

    i liked how u stated off with the question what is life. and then the or is it something more part.


    sameness could drive u crazy

    yo peace
    Aakifah
    | Posted on 2006-10-06 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]


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