Description: oh well. i know it looks like i doubt it but i dont. i try not to. i'm just so afraid of being hurt again. i dont know what to do. my life is so difficult and right now he is the only thing that i feel is actually okay right now in my life. what happens if i lose that only good thing i have? what will i have except nothing??? where would i be? who would i be? i've lost myself to him and i just want to make him happy. i'm happy... at least i am when im around him... most of the time... kind of... i dont know. sometimes he says things that make me want to cry. sometimes he says things that hurt me and i dont know what to do. how do i fix this??? does this need fixing??? is this really happening??? how long until its gone? what will i do once this is gone??? i dont kow. i'm so confused.
cant control -------------------------------------------
how do i know that he wont hurt me
when everyone tells me he will
what can i do if this fear comes true
how will i ever be still
how can i change this thing we call fate
if it is already chose
what can i do when everythings gone
when all i have is then exposed
these feelings of fear and wanting to last
is something i cant control
what will i do when all this is done
and i am left with a hole
This poem is good, I know so many people try to interfere when a new relationship starts, and then you’re left wondering what to do. At the end I suppose the decision of what you do is up to you though, you’re the one who has to make the choice.
"when all I have is then exposed" This line seems not to go with the poem, there seems a word too much, and it confuses the rhyme scheme a little. Try changing it to just "when all I have is exposed"
Wow i really liked this poem .. i can so relate to it i felt the same way with an exof mine.. most of my friends said he was playing me and such but i refused to believe them and in the end he was and i left his ass but anyway u captured the feelings wonderfully keep up the wonderious work.
Hey, I have a friend like you. She was in an abusive relationship when she was younger, a couple of years ago, and now it's hard for her to trust anyone enough to date them.
I just wanted to share that so you know you're not the only one out there that gets nervous...
Personally, if I were you, I'd trust my gut and what I personally think about this guy, and screw what everyone says. Yes their probably just looking out for your best intrests, but still, they can't know you 100%, only you can, so just relax a little and hope for the best.
Hey, You always have to remember there is someone worse off than you, I know that, from this poem, you seem to be having a rough time but I know from experience that no matter how many times your trust is broken you can always find someone new to trust - faith in life that things will get better. All the best, Steph.