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    dots Submission Name: Nobodydots
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    Author: GothamFreak
    Elite Ratio:    5.1 - 110/48/19
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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    Description:
       *in memory of all who were lost and all who have lost loved ones in Hurricane Katrina a while back*


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    dotsNobodydots
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    i can't bare it
    i hear the shouting
    they're running
    trying to escape
    knowing it's the end
    hundreds of thousands
    dead
    never to be found
    parents lost
    children alone
    no family
    no home
    you think you know
    what they're going through
    but you dont
    nobody does
    orphans everywhere
    screaming
    not knowing what to do
    there's nothing they can do
    i want to help
    although nomatter what we do
    we can't
    they had a horrible death
    and the survivors
    the survivors are scarred
    what did they
    they dont deserve this
    nobody does
    nobody understands
    nobody can help
    and neither can i
    nomatter what i try to do







    Submitted on 2006-10-06 17:59:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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