Description: I love meeten new people and Jen is a grate fish in the sea.
To my friend Jen Toke -------------------------------------------
I know this girl named Jen and something happen back when.
We had first met and thatís something I donít regret,
Cause she is a wonderful person that makers the thunder role
into lightning and after your ears ring. New life she bring
Into my shitty miserable ness but your kiss.
Will end my sadness, cause u can bless
My chest and my nest cause your the best.
Your better then the rest. Ya my lifeís a mess,
But she always likes to bet. Even her Corvette
Went up for Action but room was to congested
So it didnít get sold. Now its getten old,
But sheís always grate to talk to. Interested in what I do.
Takes me for who I am. Some weird ass man.
Who drives a dodge Ram and always has a good plan.
But usually includes token and I aint joken
Just like me SIR SMOKE-ALOT which proves she not a robot
But she is hot and her personality I like a lot
Even though she has kids. I still like to bid
On winning her love cause sheís fallen from above
So if she wont be my life mate. She still is my soul mate.
Like she loves poker and herb. Well so do I. deserve
her hand close to my heart. Hey at least itís a good start.
it's sweet. it seems like a an ode to someone ur not sure of but like just the same and are willing to take a gamble on, everyday is a bet, just make sure u still have all ur chips at the end of the day. keep up the great work.
Well, I really liked this one, but I guess you know why. Other than it being a great write of course... I don't think it sounded forced at all! I think it's perfect the way it is. How do you force a feeling anyway? And that's what this is to me, a feeling you have for... her. *v* I like it a lot. I think you should ignore there comments and highlight mine hehe. Anyway, awesome write, adding to my favs!