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Author: javajunkie
ASL Info:    21/F/ WA
Elite Ratio:    3.24 - 29 /29 /25
Words: 57
Class/Type: Poetry /Friendship
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When you need a friend
I'll be there
When you need a shoulder to cry on
I'll be there
When you need a hug
I'll be there

I'll help find you
when you need love
I'll love you

I'm here
If not in person
A call away and I'll be here.

Submitted on 2006-10-06 20:57:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  awww this is cute!!!! i think ppl need u as a friend! this one made me happy! good job!
runnino ut of things to say i have to leave goin to church!
| Posted on 2006-10-22 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]

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