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Author: javajunkie ASL Info:    21/F/ WA Elite Ratio:    3.24 - 29 /29 /25 Words: 57

Class/Type: Poetry /Friendship Total Views: 1453 Average Vote:    No vote yet. Bytes: 388

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Remember

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When you need a friend I'll be there When you need a shoulder to cry on I'll be there When you need a hug I'll be there Lost I'll help find you when you need love I'll love you Remember... I'm here If not in person A call away and I'll be here.

Submitted on 2006-10-06 20:57:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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awww this is cute!!!! i think ppl need u as a friend! this one made me happy! good job! ~akaila~ runnino ut of things to say i have to leave goin to church!

| Posted on 2006-10-22 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]

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