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As I Make Love To You

Author: LadyMustang
ASL Info:    42, female, West Virginia
Elite Ratio:    4.19 - 222 /171 /71
Words: 255
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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As I Make Love To You

As I make Love To You

Although we have never met,
Our desire we share in words
I write as you read them upon
the net.

I desire to touch your very soul,
To feel your body completely
under my control.

To give to you pleasure with just my
word, Just to read to you one passage
as you set naked at my feet your fantasy
would be conquered.

If you were right here in front of me, I
would show you how deep love could
really be.

I would undress you one button at a
time, Just to savor your desire I know
would only be mine.

As I would come closer to your face,
I would hear your heart beating and
feel it's fast pace.

My silky lips would touch upon yours
so sensually as we'd kiss, Before this
night is through baby you would know
true bliss.

When we came eye to eye, into each
soul we'd take a glance, To look into
the window of true romance

As our body's would intwine sensually
together we'd sigh, In this moment
forever we could lie.

The sweat from our passion is almost
like tears, As we make love on the net
this is our world and the rest disappears.

Written By: Wilma S. Hill
copyright@2006 October 6th

Submitted on 2006-10-06 22:31:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Nice write!.
I thought of two people sharing eachother... giving their body, soul, passion, and emotions.

I loved it.

| Posted on 2007-07-14 00:00:00 | by Magger32 | [ Reply to This ]
  This is wonderful, Wilma! Sensual and passionate, and yet poetic and tasteful!
| Posted on 2006-10-26 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
  Pretty HOT! I like what you did with this poem! It has enspired me to write something new and way out there. Anyway great write!!
Kelley Frost
| Posted on 2006-10-20 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
  Phew... making love on the net is certainly an interesting concept Wilma, and it makes the mind boggle ! There is nothing like the real thing though !

You described the encounter very well - subtle, yet bubbling underneath with pure passion, desire and real lust.

I think I need a cup of tea to cool down !

| Posted on 2006-10-08 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
  Woo Hoo!! Hot passionate stuff you got here. An interesting concept, making love on the net. Sounds frustrating as all we really have here are words. No touch, no feel, no taste, nothing but sight of words to leave one even more drawn to wanting the encounter. And, if things went well on the net, you could always look into finding this person in the flesh before you exploded from want. hee hee! As always, your passion poems are full of heat and desire, yet tasteful and well written. You create good imagery with your words. I wonder if there is a special someone you had in mind when you wrote this? Perhaps you are experiencing this online love stuff in your life? You go girl!! I always enjoy your writing. Another good passion poem.

| Posted on 2006-10-09 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]

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