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    dots Submission Name: Thousand.Billion..RandomThoughts of a GrowingChilddots
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    Author: RyukiTZR
    ASL Info:    14/F/-
    Elite Ratio:    3.94 - 133/130/44
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
    Total Views: 215
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 624



    Description:
       These are just some random ideas...blah.

    Random thoughts of a growing child.


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    dotsThousand.Billion..RandomThoughts of a GrowingChilddots
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    Thousand years, billion tears,
    How many did ya cried?
    Thousand cheers, billion fears,
    Have ya even tried?

    Thousand lives, billion at bay,
    Has yours gone ashtray?
    Thousand thoughts, billion disarray,
    Who did ya betray?

    Thousand guns, billion bullets,
    Where are ya pointin' at?
    Thousand mistreats, billion secrets,
    Whatcha' doin' after that?

    Thousand confessions, billion unsaid,
    Were yours even known?
    Thousand wounded, billion dead,
    Aren't ya the living dread?




    Submitted on 2006-10-07 02:16:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Change last line- "You can never go home."


    Whoa this was great. Second stanza hit me hard. This was heavy and a favorite. Love the slang. Love this poem.
    | Posted on 2006-10-09 00:00:00 | by ICONOCLAST | [ Reply to This ]



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