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    dots Submission Name: The Name Gamedots
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    Author: Anchiale
    ASL Info:    32/F/AL
    Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 88/73/14
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1107
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 700



    Description:
       This was something someone challenged me to do. It was just out of fun. We call it the name game, because you take someone's name and write a poem with it. Look to the left side to find out the name of the person.


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    dotsThe Name Gamedots
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    Looking at your page, while staring at your picture, I became
    Entangled by your words and
    Overcome with emotion.
    Just out of the blue, I felt like writing,
    About the way you move me, and how beautiful you are,
    Somehow taking complete control
    Over my thoughts and actions
    Never letting go...
    Always holding me close even though we are miles apart.
    Dreaming of when we will be together,
    Acting out every scene we've imagined.
    Making fiction a beautiful reality by fulfilling your fantasies and mine.
    So there will be no doubt or questions
    In your heart that
    I'm the one you cant live without.




    Submitted on 2004-05-25 08:04:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      L-E-O- J-A-S-O-N- A-D-A-M-S- I-I

    Took me a little bit to figure that out...*L*

    This is an example of an acrostic poem, by the way...good job!
    | Posted on 2004-05-25 00:00:00 | by Emerging Soul | [ Reply to This ]
      I like you po'em...................................................................................is it me? I am hoping so.........
    | Posted on 2004-05-25 00:00:00 | by Vibrant | [ Reply to This ]


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