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wishes


Author: lastdragon
ASL Info:    19/F/MO
Elite Ratio:    3.39 - 38 /43 /13
Words: 283
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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The phrase " If wishes were horses, beggars would ride" I have heard all my life from my mother so that is the only thing not orignally mine and I have no idea were it came from

other than that I hope y'all enjoy this li'l glimpse of my heart


wishes


If wishes were horses,
Beggars would ride.
If wishes came true,
You'd be by my side.

Thought I was over this crush.
Then He showed me what it's like to be held.
Thoughts tumble in a rush.
Now I wish it had been You.

There You are,
Miles away.
Here I am ,
Laying awake.

Wishing You loved me.
Wishing You held me.

If wishes were horses...
If wishes came true...

What would it take,
For You to love me?
What would it take,
For You to hold me?

I'm not being fair,
To Him or me.
I'm not being realistic,
Just wasting a dream.

Never thought love would be like this.
Never realized Ignorance really was bliss.
All this confusion from one little kiss.
Wish they were Your lips not His.

What have I become?
I've got Him on a string,
Someone else in the wings,
But all I want is You!

Why can't I get over You?
Why do I want what I can't have?
Don't dreams ever come true?
Will my heart forever beat as half?

There You are,
Miles away.
Here I am,
Laying awake.

Wishing You loved me.
Wishing You held me.

If wishes were horses,
Beggars would ride.
If wishes came true,
You'd be by my side.




Submitted on 2006-10-08 10:01:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  "Don't dreams ever come true?
Will my heart forever beat as half?"
Is a really good line. Overall i wasnt a fan of the format, but i think it got the point acrost. Not as good as your others, but good.


~Kane~
| Posted on 2006-10-08 00:00:00 | by Kane Martyr | [ Reply to This ]


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