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    dots Submission Name: Life Lessonsdots
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    Author: Mehndi Rose
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 8/5/3
    Words: 176
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsLife Lessonsdots
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    Never eat the broccoli
    Ask for seconds
    Always wave goodbye
    Love everyone
    Even the bad guys
    Watch cartoons
    Hop like a Kangaroo
    Wiggle better than a worm
    Make mud pies
    Kiss the boys
    Stuff yourself with candy
    Dress up every Halloween
    Count Christmas presents
    Laugh your heart out
    Sit on the potty
    Chew on jawbreakers
    Pop balloons
    Beg for a puppy
    Crawl in church pants
    Roll in dirt
    Spit up veggies
    Burp the ABCís
    Make a stinky
    Have Mommy kiss boo-boos
    Fall down and get back up
    Feel the sand in your toes
    Make a fort
    Play Hide-n-Seek
    Win freeze tag
    Talk to your imaginary friends
    Play Dress Up with Mommyís pearls
    Run around in undies
    Smear make up on your face
    Act fancy
    Scream a lot
    Run in circles
    Spin until you canít walk
    Have a play date with your best friend
    Stare into the sun
    Color the white walls
    Paint the dog
    And finally...
    Even if youíre old and wrinkly you are still a kid at heart,
    No matter what Life brings your way.




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      awsome poem. I was remembering my childhood....

    Its a good rememberance.

    I dont think ill ever grow up...
    | Posted on 2007-01-09 00:00:00 | by WD-40 | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey.I've come here numerous times to tell the truth, but wasn't quite sure what I was going to say if I were to leave a comment. The third time I've stopped by, and still you have no comments. So I've decided I'd 'buck-up' and sift through thoughts, and try my darndest to leave something worth while to you.
    Honestly I have no critiques, as this is really quite simply constructed and the meaning is clear. I love the childish words presented, they all took me right back to.... a week ago. haha. My dad's family and I still talk like babies sometimes, and I know others may think this completely odd; but I enjoy it. I didn't exactly have alot of a child hood, because even as a young kid I'd babysit my siblings or worry about if my mom was coming home safely tonight. So spending time with my dad and his family is alot of fun for me. And reading this poem brings me there, to his house, with that family. So on a personal bases, I really enjoyed reading every word...
    But being that this is a bias view, I'm afraid I can't say much more.
    However, I can only thankyou for writing it and sharing it with us - because no matter who you are, staying young at heart seems the best way to be. Sometimes we all just need a little reminder. :)
    | Posted on 2006-10-10 00:00:00 | by stefhy | [ Reply to This ]


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