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Sitting Duck


Author: mrmundane
ASL Info:    20/m/vancouver bc
Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 47 /96 /78
Words: 117
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Sitting Duck



Wingless pigeon legless crane
the system burns your very brain
and heart and spirit and mortal spread
this dream has left you aspiration dead

and yet you soar at every given time
despite weights enforced upon your cracking spine
your loveboats stolen in pitiless tides
only sharks left to kiss only gaping wounds to break silence

some days seem to last forever
especially the ones you don't want to remember
thoughts of death become your only choice
and from this you find your only voice

Wingless pigeon legless crane
the system burns the heart with which life came
and heart and spirit and mortal spread
this dream has left you aspiration dead





Submitted on 2006-10-08 19:24:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I love this! The imagery is perfect. Very well done!

AL
| Posted on 2006-10-08 00:00:00 | by Amanda Lynn | [ Reply to This ]


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