I'm a bit iffy on this I liked it cos I can really relate to it, but on the other it didn't fit well together and not being a stickler but it is wonder not wander
Anyway as I said I can totally relate, I used to have this boyfriend who I thought was really cool and could introduce me to the right people and make me into what I wanted to be. It wasn't until two months into the relationship that I realised what a complete dick head he was and was able to f*** him off.
Anyway keep up the good work and i'll go now and review some of your work cos god knows i am bored today. And could you please review some of my work, it would be greatly appreciated.