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    dots Submission Name: Stubborn Salesmen approachdots
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    Author: lolavie
    ASL Info:    23/female/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 70/175/103
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 879
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 763



    Description:
       UHMMM THIS IS LIKE THE CONTINUING poem for 'for acl'..something i hope many of you can relate to..about a guy who falls for a girl thats apparently seriously hard to get..the guy just wont give up...


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    dotsStubborn Salesmen approachdots
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    Too sarcastic for you?
    Taste the lemon, its better
    Im the smallest gun youve ever had to handle
    but my bullets go straight to your heart
    Whats this?
    Since when do guys like you armor their hearts?
    Sorry, not used to being wanted

    Knock on my hearts door
    Hello, returning bullet
    My heart fills with a warm sensation
    A hard tear softens
    My heart and my past switch places
    as resistence comes into play
    The question, Why Me? arrives

    No, go away
    If its something im not used to i dont want it
    my conscious paces between
    the state of guilty and innocent
    Undecided
    Jury adjourned
    Case postponed til further notice




    Submitted on 2004-05-25 09:06:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Well, I was hoping for a slightly more romantic ending, but then it would probably not have been as interesting. Quite a good poem. In the meantime, have fun and just enjoy friendship. No need to fall seriously in love, friendship's better anyway...
    | Posted on 2004-05-26 00:00:00 | by Lelik | [ Reply to This ]
      I came back....., sorry I left. Nothing to do with your po'em... I like how you have placed the words within. Your po'em is very interesting.
    | Posted on 2004-05-25 00:00:00 | by Vibrant | [ Reply to This ]


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