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Damn Scars

Author: D.C.M.
ASL Info:    18/M/TN.
Elite Ratio:    2.76 - 73 /110 /77
Words: 73
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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A poem that I came up with upon being asked about the scars on my arm by my little nephiew. "Why does your arm say Sarah?" he asks.. I just smiled and said because I love her.

Damn Scars

Scars on my arm
Scars in my mind.
Scars of my lies.
One for each day.
One for each time I made her cry.
Scars on my leg.
Scars on my chest.
Scars of my pain.
One for every time I screamed.
One for the time I said "I don't care.".
Scars on my arm.
Scars on my mind.
Scars for my life.
Truth is. ..
The scars all came when you left.

Submitted on 2006-10-09 14:09:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Intersting.... I like this, its ... different but a good different.


| Posted on 2006-10-09 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]

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