I have never fallen asleep in class, but if I could put it to words, this would be exactly how I would envision it. I could feel your the sleepiness, falling, muscles go loose and then the pencil falls and jolts me awake, hiding my face so they cannot see my embarassment.
This is lighthearted and I loved the structure of it.
I haven't been on in awhile and I've missed reading your work.
haha! amazing. Really liked what you did with the spacing, it kind of added a beat, flow, even. this was about school, no? some sort of educational system in which the student loses attention (thats all of them..) This reminds me of a person drowning. and then realizing that he/she is not fortunate enough to be really drowning and is actually still apart of the world. like fading into the back of a classroom
the only thing i was confused about was "Closed." I imagined a door being locked tight, but am not sure what you were referencing. other than that i really enjoyed this short peice.
I didn't like this, I can relate that when you are dead tired you cannot make sense of anything but spelling everything wrong just confused me and it made no sense to me, i lost interest in the poem by the third line. I dunno i just don't think that misspelling everything is the way to put this poem. Anyway each to his own :)