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    dots Submission Name: A Life Of Liesdots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 230
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsA Life Of Liesdots
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    I smile as much as I can
    But my tears are left undried
    I have heaps to say
    But wont because it hurts so much
    If you look deep into my eyes
    You will see the pain no one else see's
    I smile so no one can see how much I hurt
    I laugh so no one can see how much I cry
    But I remain quiet so I donít scream the pain
    No one knows the real me
    No one has the time to understand
    Everything I go through
    As long as I say please and
    Thank you no is any the wiser
    To the pain that is slowly killing me inside
    One day someone will have the time to figure me out
    But that day may be too late
    So I cry every night before I sleep
    That someone can hear all the pain that I weep
    Fake smiles fake laughs they are easy to do
    But when I really smile the light shines through
    Only one person can make me smile
    But he doesnít realise just how much he means to me
    And I donít think he ever will
    The hardest part of life is having sumone you love
    So close but not being able to hold them
    And no matter how many times you try to ignore him
    He is your first and last thought




    Submitted on 2006-10-09 16:42:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ive read most of our poems and thier all great you have lots of feeling keep writing i have only one person that can make me really smile and thatshim my favorite person in the world jaysin well im going to go k keep going and keep writing luv ya
    | Posted on 2006-10-11 00:00:00 | by Cara R.D | [ Reply to This ]


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