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    Author: Sarah J
    ASL Info:    14/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 28/30/37
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Im just so confused
    I just cant settle
    Life seems to be dissapearing
    Like wind in a desert
    I dont know really where to run
    Even though your arms are open wide
    Waiting to catch me if I fall
    But I wont let myself
    I will not let myself be picked up again
    To have my scrapes and bruises cured
    Would be like sin
    I cannot let myself be caught
    So I cannot fall, or at least I cant in my eyes
    I cant see myself falling
    When everyone around me does
    But thats okay, as long as Im not caught
    By someone who might drop me again
    To let myself be held in gentle loving arms
    Would be like throwing myself into a cage
    With no doors, no windows
    To have myself be held in arms which mean
    Nothing
    Is much easier
    Make believe is easier to do than reality
    Especially when you can wake up
    and its gone
    Just gone




    Submitted on 2006-10-10 17:47:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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