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    dots Submission Name: Denmadots

    Author: francin
    ASL Info:    25/F/Philippines
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 161
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       You would come to know the real person within me as you go on reading this poem, which I consider as the mirror of my own soul.

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    I hate to say goodbye, for it hurts me more than it hurts the one I left behind.
    I'm afraid to say sorry, for it may not be enough to win back the heart of the one I hurt.
    I make myself look serene just to hide the inner turmoil that's making me doubt my own strength.
    I let my tears fall only when it's dark, for it's only there that I find solitude and strength to continue fighting in the battlefield of life.
    I hide my own thoughts from others so that they would not be eaten by my doubts and fears.
    I keep my friends close, here in my heart, for it's from them that I draw strength to smile and face the world again.
    I keep my heart open, but guard it with all my will, for it's where I keep my dearest treasures
    -------------THE ONES I LOVE-------------
    Safe and free from the harshness of the world outside.

    Submitted on 2006-10-11 00:26:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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