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    dots Submission Name: The Strangerdots

    Author: Jolie
    ASL Info:    22/F/Cali
    Elite Ratio:    1.77 - 11/7/5
    Words: 167
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe Strangerdots

    Tonight I looked myself in the mirror. I stared and stared without blinking until my face seemed to morph into someone I didn't know, into some stranger that I didn't recognize. I wanted to cry but i wouldn't allow myself. I looked in the strangers eyes. I studied their skin, their lips, their wrinkles, their life. I asked that stranger who they were. The stranger had no response for me. I asked the stranger why she couldn't tell me who she was, she said she didn't know. "How could you not know who you are?" I inquired calmly. The stranger said she had been defining herself by what she could be. "Well, what could you be?" I asked her. "Everything." She said. "But I am nothing now." Then she asked ME
    a question. "How can I change my definition of myself?" I thought for a moment, "Well, I suppose you can become what you believe you can be, but you'll have to start today."

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      This is so good
    I Love mirror poetry and write a lot of it myself
    You captured that sense of wanting to know more about yourself and the emotion it carrys very well in this
    Excellent Job!!!
    I look forward to reading more new writes from you
    Keep writing as it helps heal
    God Bless

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    | Posted on 2006-10-12 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      interesting... i like it great work

    | Posted on 2006-10-11 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]

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