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    dots Submission Name: Can't Stop The Raindots
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    Author: PolaroidMemory
    ASL Info:    18/F/IN
    Elite Ratio:    2.93 - 99/93/28
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Misc/Happy
    Total Views: 141
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 827



    Description:
       I don't really know why I wrote this one.


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    dotsCan't Stop The Raindots
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    I walk outside in the freezing rain
    and see no one.
    Cars pass by but they don't car
    about the weather.
    The rain beats down on the grass,
    on the ground.
    I wonder when the rain will stop
    or die away.
    I continue walking down the sidewalk,
    fixing my scarf.
    The rain is hitting my face so hard
    that it stings.
    But I continue on my way
    through the rain.
    People look at me through shop windows
    like I'm crazy.
    But I have no other way to get around,
    only my feet.
    I finally arrive at where I need to be,
    the grocery store.
    I head back home and wave at the passerbys
    as they hurry.
    They keep living their lives and it's still raining.
    Can't stop the rain.




    Submitted on 2006-10-11 08:23:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i like it.
    i see its under "happy" but i found more than that.
    its really cute, but somehow i can find this fitting into a novel or something about someone just going out for a walk and realizing these things.
    nice work.

    <3
    <bleedingtears>
    | Posted on 2006-10-11 00:00:00 | by BleedingTears | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this.. Simply because I love walking in the Rain.. I am from kobenhavn and it rains alot, me and my friend Pris love to go on long walks in the rain or to dance on our rooftop of our building it is so beautiful. I love how you describe this as a happy poem, the rain always makes me smile, and so did your poem. So.... Tusind Tak ( thousand thanks)
    | Posted on 2006-10-11 00:00:00 | by Artist4rent | [ Reply to This ]



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