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    dots Submission Name: Nightmare for a Brave New Worlddots
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    Author: Aruemos
    ASL Info:    20/M/StL
    Elite Ratio:    7.24 - 102/79/40
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    dotsNightmare for a Brave New Worlddots
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    Death on the riverfront

    Blood in the water

    Don’t drink the rite.

    Poison in the mind of the unborn child.



    Betty BOOMS loudly

    Little Boy enchants a sorrowful tune.

    Iron eyes see what lies from miles high

    Tension ready to subliminate.



    Ivan and Sam sit alone in their Father’s park.

    There grows a pale, white tree in a hole.

    Albert Appleseed planted it there, in the heart.

    Children go on playing checkers in the dark.



    Remembering the advice of Joshua and Blue.

    They would flip a coin

    if it had not rolled off a red line.

    Even then neither wishes to make the first move.




    Submitted on 2006-10-11 11:54:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      What is this about?

    I am not sure. But maybe that is a sign that it is good. I am unclear of what it is tryiong to convey, but not in a way that I immediately give up on trying to understand it. This piece draws me in a bit.

    My opnion is that it is about uncertainty. Coming of age and realizing that we gotta choose a path. What way to go?

    Anyway,,,good job.,
    | Posted on 2009-06-12 00:00:00 | by nolram | [ Reply to This ]



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