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    dots Submission Name: love,loss,a new relationshipdots
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    Author: stormkrow
    ASL Info:    24/ male / Montello Wi
    Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 51/52/39
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 796
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 630



    Description:
       this was Benz before he died I had him write short poems about his life
    and this is what I got from him sorry that it took me FOREVER TO POST AGAIN but I am still grieving so please bear with me on this


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    dotslove,loss,a new relationshipdots
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    LOVE

    I normally don't say I love you
    when I do I mean it
    so if you'll stay with me through my termoil
    Iwill do anything for you
    I will always and forever love you

    LOSS

    I lost my first love to suicide
    I lost my second love to jealousy
    I don't want to lose you

    A NEW RELATIONSHIP

    I am looking for someone
    to be there for me when i need them
    I am looking for someone to care
    I am looking for someone to hold me when I cry
    I am looking for some one like you.




    Submitted on 2006-10-11 12:53:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow, this is heart breaking. It would have been a little less sad under different circumstances, but I guess that's life.
    I admire you for taking the stress to post this, even if it was a while -a long ass time ago- back.
    | Posted on 2013-07-24 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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