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    dots Submission Name: A vampire love story page1dots
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    Author: net
    Elite Ratio:    2.9 - 21/14/6
    Words: 318
    Class/Type: Story/Love
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       This is just a vampire love story inspired by one of my friends stories.


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    "Everyday I think about her. I dream of her. My body it yearns for her, Hungers for the taste of her sweetlips." There is a light tap on his shoulder and her voice so sweet to his ears.
    "Sir?" That one single word ripped him from his daydream. His eyes opened slowely to the view of the diner he was in.
    "Did I....Fall asleep?...No my mind jus wandered." Tonight he had come to see her just as he had almost every night this week. He had yet to even tell her his name, though he already knew hers it was Elanie. Tonight he had his chance to speak to her. He knew though all he would tell her was his order. A cup of coffee same as every other night. It would sit there for about an hour untouched as his mind would wander and he would lose himself in thoughts of her.
    "Sir?" Once again his mind had wandered, he quickly looked to her.
    "I am sorry." She simply smiled at him.
    "It's ok. So what would you like?" Her smile was so beautiful to him. It warmed him and took almost all his strength not to pull her to him and say. You I want you.
    "A coffee." That was all he could manage to say. So badly did he want to say he loved her he wanted to be with her but he couldn't. the words wouldn't come out now. He watched as she walked back to the counter. Watched her sweet red lips move as she spoke. He felt his body yearning for her he had to have her, and with this yearning now rose a hunger. by the time she turned around to look at where he had been seconds before he was gone. If you were close you would have heard a small sad sigh escape from her lips.





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