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    dots Submission Name: **High Standardsdots
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    Author: Caotic_Disaster
    ASL Info:    16/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 447/349/148
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    Bytes: 908



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    dots**High Standardsdots
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    To me
    It seems as if you think
    I'm just another person
    Who walks in you life
    And is disposable at your needs
    To help you with grades
    Fill your Saturday night schedule
    Or talk about your problems.
    But when it comes to something
    That is ment to be a joint effort
    The pressure goes to me.
    No support is given
    When I'm down in a bad mood
    I shouldn't have to tell you
    When I'm having a bad day
    Can't you tell?

    I understand
    Your point too
    You want to hang out with him
    And hear the latest gossip
    Have a social life
    And not be stuck with someone like me
    Who goes to all her meetings
    Maybe I expect too much
    From you as a friend
    I thought I was being reasonable
    But maybe my standards are too high.




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      Try "High Standards".
    | Posted on 2006-10-13 00:00:00 | by Lacrimosa | [ Reply to This ]
      Aw! i think this is something that a lot of people would be able to relate to, I'm sure a lot of people have felt the same things that you described in your poem. Even i had a friend who took me for granted...the sad part is, months have gone by since we have spoken a word to each other and silently, we dislike each other now, but i also feel this sense of obligation for taking care of her if she ever needed me. so in other words, it takes a long time to get over these things if they get bad.

    For the write of the poem, nothing really stood out for me, there isnt anything great, but nothing that sucks either.

    ashley
    | Posted on 2006-10-12 00:00:00 | by DanceADream | [ Reply to This ]
      should be Who walks in your life and on the title maybe granted because it seems that your talking about a friend who takes you for granted
    | Posted on 2006-10-11 00:00:00 | by Cara R.D | [ Reply to This ]
      should be Who walks in your life and on the title maybe granted because it seems that your talking about a friend who takes you for granted
    | Posted on 2006-10-11 00:00:00 | by Cara R.D | [ Reply to This ]
      Reminds me of some of the selfish relationships I've been in w/ friends or boyfriends. Hmm. Now that I think about it most of my relationships are like this. Your poem makes me think. I like that. I sometimes think my standards are high. Maybe the title can have something to do with standards or expectations. I don't know. I usually just use a line out of my poem for the title cuz I'm not good w/ titles. ^.^ Neways, I really like this one.
    | Posted on 2006-10-11 00:00:00 | by LovelyGoddess | [ Reply to This ]
      should be Who walks in your life and on the title maybe granted because it seems that your talking about a friend who takes you for granted
    | Posted on 2006-10-11 00:00:00 | by Cara R.D | [ Reply to This ]
      should be Who walks in your life and on the title maybe granted because it seems that your talking about a friend who takes you for granted
    | Posted on 2006-10-11 00:00:00 | by Cara R.D | [ Reply to This ]
      Reminds me of some of the selfish relationships I've been in w/ friends or boyfriends. Hmm. Now that I think about it most of my relationships are like this. Your poem makes me think. I like that. I sometimes think my standards are high. Maybe the title can have something to do with standards or expectations. I don't know. I usually just use a line out of my poem for the title cuz I'm not good w/ titles. ^.^ Neways, I really like this one.
    | Posted on 2006-10-11 00:00:00 | by LovelyGoddess | [ Reply to This ]
      should be Who walks in your life and on the title maybe granted because it seems that your talking about a friend who takes you for granted
    | Posted on 2006-10-11 00:00:00 | by Cara R.D | [ Reply to This ]
      This is really good. This is a topic that doesn't get talked about all the much. About being in a relationship and/or having a friendship that's for the most part one sided at least in this form.
    The last stanza kinda made me mad, in every situation someone has to lower their standerds a little...I don't agree with that. I think that we all have them for a reason and that we shouldn't have to change them for other people. I believe that out there somewhere there are people that have similar standerds if not the same.
    Great Write!

    ~javajunkie~

    p.s. I couldn't think of anything for a title. Sorry
    | Posted on 2006-10-11 00:00:00 | by javajunkie | [ Reply to This ]


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