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    dots Submission Name: New Found Addictiondots
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    Author: ladiesplanet1
    ASL Info:    23.cali baby
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 720/463/165
    Words: 183
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 533
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsNew Found Addictiondots
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    I've found a new addiction,
    That I can't live with out.
    You are the drug I long for.
    Love's what I'm all about.
    You are my obsession.
    Is it okay to feel this way?
    i cannot breathe without you.
    But still my world's gray.

    When you're with me I'm happy
    WHen I see you I feel joy.
    I say I want to play,
    But you're more than just a toy.
    I don't want to play mind games.
    At least not with you.
    I want us to be true.

    You're my new found addiction.
    I love how you make me feel.
    I fear this emotion.
    To me, this fear is real.
    But I don't wnat to lose it,
    Because I'm in love with you.
    Will this soon be over?
    Wil I know what to do?

    When you're not besiade me,
    My world falls apart.
    I just can't control it.
    It tears apart my heart.
    But I know that soon I'll see you.
    I know things will be alright.
    You're with me when I'm dreaming.
    In the day and late at night.




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    ||| Comments |||
      You have such a loving and giving heart and in this piece you are acknowledging the best feeling - Love.

    Remember, it's reflected from within and I hope and pray you love yourself so you can have this, always, in your life!

    love,peace,joy&smiles to share
    tif
    | Posted on 2007-03-22 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      I can so relate to this. It actually has me on the verge of tears. I especially like the last part of the poem. It mirrors my thoughts and feelings exactly.
    Katana
    | Posted on 2006-10-16 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]
      I like happy poems or when people fall in love.
    This is a good one, I hope this isn't fiction.
    I wish you all the best with your addiction and may you never recover.

    The Poor Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2006-10-12 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]


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