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    dots Submission Name: When <@> AM tHE wInddots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 202
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsWhen <@> AM tHE wInddots
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    When <@> AM
    tHE Wind
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    Where
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      Explosive stack of falling words
    Eclipsed by winds soft kiss
    Soaring who knows where
    Like a silent dove beating wings of air
    And falling, rising
    Cool or warm, without a care

    I cannot see you
    But I know you touch the grass and leaves
    And ever growing taller trees
    And make some waves upon the bay
    And rip my hat from upon my head

    I try to grab hold of you, yet you slip through my fingers
    As if you were water that did not exist
    Encase me in your twister wind
    And take me to your sky fortress

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    Another great poem deserves another. Good work tiff!
    | Posted on 2007-03-02 00:00:00 | by manwithnoname | [ Reply to This ]
      I saw you posted and had to come in here and see what you had written. This is a very imaginative piece in context and in style and I wouldnt expect anything less from you. Nature at its finest, the wind, an invisible being yet so prominent, so powerful, so strong. Kinda spiritual as we know it's there, we can feel it around us, yet it cannot be seen directly. I love your style and the inspiration your poems are filled with. So good to see you writing again. Hope you are well.

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2006-10-14 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      As Bob Dylan says "the answer my friend, is blowing in the wind".

    Your affinity to the wind is admiable. Your write is awe inspiring and very good.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2006-10-12 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      U never cease to amaze me with ur poetry and being, I would love to be the wind and blow away to a better place. Never stop being epiphany. Maybe a wind will blow me ur way.

    shannon
    | Posted on 2006-10-12 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]
      Very windlike...here one place...there the next...and I see you still like making your poems visual. Making the words more like art.

    A true epiphany classic. Like the reflection|noitcelfer or the rain after the storm, you are the wind of word, the words of nature. You are the artists with the all-seeing <@>.

    Keep it up Tiff!
    | Posted on 2006-11-04 00:00:00 | by manwithnoname | [ Reply to This ]


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