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Compassion


Author: mrmundane
ASL Info:    20/m/vancouver bc
Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 47 /96 /78
Words: 90
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Compassion



Does she know nothing Everything I ever knew
So Black
Night for everyday Every year
I've fought back so long i am so far lost
How will she ever find me How long 'til one gives up
Life has given me so many false hopes
I'm Teased To the limit

Every bastard who ever broke me down
Found so much happiness
I was such a fool To be an Optomist
The world is one big lesson
That it's foolish To give compassion
And I was so damn compassionate




Submitted on 2006-10-12 00:48:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  "I was such a fool To be an Optimist"

Yeah, nothing good can come from that... except the fact that you now know what not to be.
You know what they say: Losing all hope is freedom.
(Well, I don't know if "they" say it, but the guy in Fight Club does.)

I really like this.

You're talent has always fascinated me.

-nikkki
| Posted on 2006-10-12 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]


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